A story of how an underworld kingpin (after dying) transmigrates into a world closely resembling ancient China.The greatest problem with this story? Story development, and character design. This story is driven by the protagonist (every character other than the cliche kind old sister trope may as well not even exist). This means that the characterisation of the protagonist is immensely important.However...the protagonist's characterisation is all over the place. The protagonist during his past life was a cold, brutal, ruthless kingpin. After transmigrating, he meets his old sister...and in an instant his heart begins to soften. What kind of silliness is this? As the story goes on, the protagonist decides he must be a 'good guy' for the sake of the people who care for him (his mother, and older sister). This characterisation is so naive and silly that it left me absolutely flabbergasted.A story with good potential ruined by the hypocritical redemption of the protagonist.
What can I say except that is a really fun read and that it only needs faster releases/more chapters for this to rank as one of my most favorite LN I ever read
This novel definitely has potential, but based off of the synopsis you have to be creative, and imaginative enough for each reincarnation 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
When I first started this book, it felt as the the writer was confused and was changing the story a lot😭 but with just the ones she's written now it seems interesting and ok
i read like 13 chaps imma just review what i got from it so like the mc is a `naive guy it seems like and as you know everyone has a system if u don't like your mc spouting out all his abilities and skills then your not gonna like this one but hey maybe there's gonna be something that's gonna make him change i would prefer him getting beaten or almost dying from getting assassinated from jealousy of his system it would be good maybe he'll start hiding his system and make a fake system and go solo instead of a party not that i mind about joining a party but it would be complicated to hide his system unless he wants to only use that class' skill
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