Great potential, horrible writing. The names make no sense, the way the characters act doesn't make sense, and how much time passes in the story isn't explained at all. The author could have make a really good story, but it's rushed and made into something that is hard to read.
I have read till the latest chapters and story is good so far.You can see author has experience writing and the scenes feel natural and not forced.I also like the mentality of MC who only cares about his revenge and is not trusting of others.His wife from what we have seen till now is a nice character so far.Story is an interesting take on hero and demon king including hunters.Author is setting up the story well with many questions which we want to know like the quest system, hunters, demon world and truth being Mc resurrection.A very good story till now and will recommend everyone to at least give it a try before drawing any conclusions.
read for your self to find out ......I have nothing to say ....just my rating is enough to say what I want😆..................and how I feel about the story
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