When a Bard Can't Carry a Tune

I feel like the author could have done a lot better job since the basic plot is very interesting and you can see the author improving with more chapters but after like around chapter 20 or so you just feel like the MC is kinda idiotic, the plot is interesting but I just feel like the author didn't do it justice.

trash with within trash mc treat is a tree yet think with his dick also treats his loyal subordinates just because he is a simp..............................

would be a lot better if it didn't just repeat the same obvious information over and over again, these first forty chapters could have been 20

The good-for-nothing cultivator is a romance-cultivation story between Lu Qingyun and Qin Keqin. He is a first realm cultivator while she is a seventh realm cultivator with a mysterious past. Read how Lu Qingyun cultivates from a lowly cultivator to a monstrous genius cultivator as he tries to impress the love of his life. TGFNC is a light story. There won't be lots of killings *roll eyes* or flying cultivators (basically, it is more down to earth) and closer to Xianxia than Xuanhuan. If you enjoy the story, please add to your collection and support with power stones for my motivation;)

Alright Here I am After reading 189 chapters,I could still read more but yeah I've come to a decision that this is the most optimal state to comment about this novel as it has come to a great changeWriting quality:- 5 🌟 the writing quality is  pretty good,I can actually feel immersion and realism while reading the novel... The author's ways of describing stuff is really unique and interesting as well.Story Development:- 4🌟 Now this is one of the most shocking thing for me as the story's writing,Tone and almost everything changed drastically... and yeah the change was absolutely awesome,But yeah the reason I gave it four star is because it feels inconsistent to me and I feel the pace of the story should be properly adjusted because other than it's pretty good Character design:- 5 🌟 The character's personality is explained properly and there are times where we can relate to them and sometimes I agree and predict the decisions they make,So yeah it pretty good. The characters are interesting to say the leastUpdating stability:- Uhh I'm not sure about it since I binge read the whole so yeah let's not talk about this one World background:- 4 🌟 although I understand that too much world background sometimes makes the story boring but in this case It would be better if I could get some details out of the places he visits,Like when he visits different places In a particular floor you only mention it as it's a village,Or there is a place with a waterfall and the triad territory has lots of trees other than that it's pretty goodNow my personal opinion,It's a pretty good novel with an interesting story with a bunch of characters and it's fun read

I really like how the story started. It brought in its own way a unique beginning. The story and the interaction are enjoyable to read and worth trying out.

I was only able to read the first chapter, but the base for the story is promising. The banter between the friends is relatable, and their dialogue flows well, which, to me; is a good sign for future chapters. The bus Scene is 😱(I won’t say more because then it’ll be a spoiler😁).There were a few present and past tense inconsistencies, but no grammatical errors or such that I found. All in all: both the work and author show high potential. Keep it going Author!❤️

One of the best novels about the 2nd WW, historical events modified in a believable way, very good writing and daily updates, seeing great historical figures and their exploits in a story is incredible, thank you for the good work, gold among a mountain of rocks