No doubt good story potential but my man get a editor or someone to check your grammar. That is the biggest weak point of this book. But other than that keep it up.
This is not a cleverly written novel.For people who read several Cultivation novels, this is will be unbearable to read, as the Mc is not smart, unnecessarily stubborn and always intivites calamities(problems) upon himself. This novel is also slow paced. So, Mc's actions are even more irritating with this pace.Those people who just started reading Chinese Cultivation novels, they might find this novel likable as it has proper progression of story.
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Prime's brows scrunched together in thought as to what could be their target. She looked at the Lord after deliberating internally and coming out with nothing. She pouted her lips and inhaled deeply.
The air crackled, gunshots pouring into the ambulance as loud as thunder and as fast as lightning. Slow to react, Hope watched on helplessly as one after the other bullets poured in through one side of the vehicle and exited out the other.
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