What! The Wives in My Dreams Are Real?

Pretty good! The World Background is good. You have handles the story to a good pace. As a fellow Nepalese, I am very much intrested to see the future of this story. I would suggest you to improve the english and have a fellow writer discuss in the plot a bit.That's all from me . Lakhi rahanus. dami xa story

How are people enjoying this? The MC is very ignorant, the pacing is exceedingly slow and the lack of world background is unbelievable. I find it sad how real world corporations were also used...Lazy from my point of view.

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It's a good novel marred by the fact that the mc is stupid and quite a pushover. You'd think the overlord would have one thing they're good at but that seems false that I wonder how the hell he became an overlord in the first place. He gets pushed by an ai, his teacher, goblin, and even a player. Sorry but I'm done. I can't bear read a novel about that but if you can look past it, it's decent. I can't however and I wouldn't continue this further.

"Sensei!" Hisako screeched, running to his side. "Oh no!"

[Red Flow Street near Water National Airport, Boss!]

{<{Max Lvl}>}

White most covered the whole area as even snow flakes started falling down from the sky. Stunned and surprised Grant was not able to stop his gaping mouth from falling when he saw the silhouette, as it evoked many emotions in his mind. It kept on changing from shocked to excitement to joy to shame and then to melancholy, and then back to shocked and others until he heard a voice.