What should I do if my best friend is a green tea? [Transmigrated into a Book]

Story has a good premise, but the writing needs some work.The transition (at least for the first good bit) is very rough, at times contradicting itself, or not making sense.The pacing is wildly inconsistent as well, which makes following along a bit difficult.Lots of unnecessary repetition and/or rewording of information, sometimes for entire chapters.Main character is supposed to be very smart, but does some really stupid things, such as throwing away all his advantages (stealth, range, first attack) to rule-of-cool the boss instead.If you can read though this (and ignore some bizarre world building choices) it looks like it could be fun.

On the 1st day I voted for this one , the druid one and the livestreamer with the emerging monsters. But well apparently we are not getting any of them, for years now I lost close to all my interest in strength growth and combat followed my combat...

Man what can i say its f##king annoying to read. Author use she he we wherever he wants. After reading this novel i m started to feel like my English has deteriorate. Plzzz read at your own risk.

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Very interesting novel.................................…................ ....... ................................................ .............Nice.

As it was an Party by Xhen corporations, it was hard for Songs to not get any news. Thinking of this reason, Song Rhi had planned for the situation in advance.

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid

Kash "Great to see you come sit and eat after we can battle I was waiting for you for  what felt like hours." as I see Cinder eating away at the other end of the table and just sigh and sit down as we make some small talk before we head to the battle field. When I see Louie head to the Referee stand