the English and writing... is barely readable, you could but you need to have patience in rearranging them to make it manageable. Mistakes like comma, capital letters and redundancy are issues I just... sigh.other than the occasional commentary, there isn't much of a change and that's just a waste of time, as I could just watch the anime.the Character... there are a lot of plotholes like his psychology and pacing in character development, he didn't change and even if he did he just copy pace the mc. And not a good one at that.the System... god why... normally I have no problem but the pacing and redundancy is just an eyesore.
Story is very mediocre. MC is forced by system to be a fake monk. System forced MC characteristics and attitude towards everyone so basically system is the MC. I feel interaction of MC with other people are very unrealistic. Like everyone who meets MC acts shamelessly and arrogantly with some kind of adversity towards MC for no apparent reason....the plots are too forced.
I like the story would love to see more even the raw if it doesn't get picked. This one seem a little more organized and not rushed compared to a few of a similar genre the author should write more and continue with the current pace the story seems to have.
This story has a lot of potential, a good and enjoyable plot, most importantly, a relatable and interesting Mc, the grammar is good and understandable,the author did a great job!
Fan for a reason. I love fast burn romance books and oh, our author is so good at that. I love how she crafted the carnival and all that. Gosh! I'm inlove 😭💞🫧
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