Scale is sort of weird, 10k means 1 per second is 2.7 hours. even if you kill multiple per shot, can you do such attacks nonstop when you have to find the beasts too? also, the interactions between characters are sort of cookie cutter. interesting premise but nothing special.
Yeah, sorry just couldn’t get past the really rough translation. I keep coming back and trying a few more chapters but had to give up. Right now most of the characters are pretty flat with weird spikes of personality that don’t always match. The story is also lacking descriptions and details, while reading like a list. Congrats on writing and please keep up the hard work. Everyone starts somewhere and it is already more than I can do.
I love giving 5's to promising novels. The idea is unique and has a lot of potential. I hope you could proofread it in the future as that's the only concerning thing I found while reading.
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