What Are You Two Doing?

The appraising elder continued to ask, "Did you gain your Class 2 Monster cores from killing magical beasts?" Despite the fact he was far overstepping his boundaries, nobody tried to stop him, since it was not only the elder that was extremely curious to know the answer. Even all of the teachers on the platform felt the same way, and they wanted a clear-cut confirmation.

Lilly and Dante laughed and. "if your going to be that embarrassed how are you going to comfort Jeana?" Lilly asked as she squeezed Dante.

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"က်န္းရႊမ္ မင္းက ဘာမ်ားဝမ္းသာျပေနတာလဲ။ မင္းဘယ္လို ေအာက္တန္းက်တဲ့နည္းသံုးၿပီး ငါတို႔ရဲ႕ မင္းမန္ ေတြကို သိေနလဲေတာ့ မသိဘူး။ ဘယ္လိုပဲ ျဖစ္ျဖစ္ မင္းက ေက်ာင္းမွာ အဆင့္အနိမ့္ဆံုး ဆရာပဲ။ မင္းလိုဆရာက လူေရွ႕သူေရွ႕မွာ ငါတို႔ေတြကို ဒဏ္ရာရေအာင္ လုပ္လိုက္တယ္ဆိုတာ ငါက ေက်ာင္းကို ျပန္တိုင္လိုက္ရင္ မင္းဆရာဆက္လုပ္လို႔ရမယ္လို႔မ်ား ထင္ေနလား? "

Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb

Zhang Liu placed everything he brought along on the wooden desk. He scanned the room and saw that, yet again, this student beside the window was sleeping!

First of all, it's a very well-written book, and I really enjoyed reading it. So I will give my pros and cons now.Pros:-It's well-written and easy to understand, which is probably because the author is from America, and English is their mother tongue. But it doesn't matter since the story is great!-The title of the book is great and unique.-The background is well-explained, even though I wish there would have been some more information about his past and how the three of them became good friends.Cons:-The chapters are way too long. You should probably split them into smaller chapters, but not everyone will probably dislike it. Also, it seems the chapters become shorter as the story progresses, which is good, but you should probably fix the first chapters which are way too long.-There are still some small information and grammar mistakes there and there in the story, but I'm sure after your book receives an editor, it will get fixed by him/her.Those were my pros and cons, but overall, I still give this novel 5/5 stars because I see a great future for this book.

I had my fill! It was a great one, also a fascinating and interesting novel.keep it up, author!

For the length of the chapters the description of the status and skills and so on are waaaay to long. Dude no one can keep that stuff in their mind when reading and also it doesnt even matter. I really like the Kingdom building aspect but again the first fight scene was way to long. Its fine if you can write 1000-2000 chapters but if it goes on like this you will geh nowhere.

This story has a lot of potential and I really enjoy evil mc stories. Hope the author doesn’t drop

This is a very good book and i enjoyed it so much. Thanks for the writing Mr.Author

This is awesome , I like the part where he pierced the eyes of the  zombies with his thumbs alone🔥🔥🔥🔥