Welcome to the adult AV World!

If you have any questions regarding the story I would try and answer them in the replies of this review.Now to the review. It's hard to assess your, own work. I won't give myself all five starts for everything and think that I'm the best. I'm not confident in my writing skill, but I hope that it's on the average level. I won't be able to update the novel frequently and write more than three chapters a week because of my work. Right now this is a hobby. The story development, characters, worldbuilding, all may be unnecessarily slow-paced or written without appropriate attention.Yet I hope that someone would find this story attractive and enjoyable. I don't need powerstones, if you want, you can spend them on a more deserving novel. I don't need hollow five-star reviews that don't describe the novel, but I would appreciate any, review, even one-star. As long as it describes what and where I should change and improve, ups and downs of this story.

DON'T BUY THIS BOOK! THE WHOLE BOOK SALE IS A TRICK!Starting from chapter 391, the translation goes bad, the names of the sprites turn into Chinese, names and terms are mozed up, AND WORST OF ALL!! THERE IS NO SPACE BETWEEN THE PARAGRAPHS! I IS JUST ONE BIG PARAGRAPH PER CHAPTER.

I just like it and just writing things here because its making me write 150 characters so that my review becomes valid and im running out of things to say

I have to say I really enjoyed this book. The mc is hard working and smart and is very sociable. I like how the mc isn't ignored and is actually appreciated for his hard work and given his just rewards. He doesnt have the whole out to get him.

I think that the protagonist is quite dumb at first, I mean there are like so many people who are immortals but he only notice three years after he came.

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Its decent. Just be prepared for a lot of filler chapters. As in entire chapters of people on forums freaking out and repeating what just happened in the chapter before.

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