The way of putting a 18 year old kid and a 9 year old man ooh just awesome concept, the humour was great too. An unique for for the genre, love to see where it goes
Dear Author, you had an intriguing concept for the story! The plot is interesting. I like the interactions between Matt and Ashton. I wonder who is a kid and who is an adult there...
Well done!
This was an enjoyable read!
Some of the scenes hold solid humour, and the story seems to be developing rather quickly. The relationship between the two main characters and their home life was established quickly, which made their reactions to their circumstances further on realistic to the matter at hand. The writing could use some work. Oftentimes, it swaps from present to past tense, especially in descriptions and dialogue tags. This can be read over though, and the writing is easy to read. I like how quick the story is developing, and the system seems interesting as well. This book looks open to opportunity!
What I love about this story is that it moves forward at a nice pace and not sluggishly, which really grips my interest. I love the characters, both the boys are so relatable and funny. Keep it up!
I liked the dynamic pair of the MCs. For a second, I thought one was created only for character development but re-read the synopsis. It is refreshing to see two MCs in an apocalyptic world. Has a The Last Of Us bond vibe. Keep up the good work.
Interesting story. It hooked me from the start. Ashton is quite a character. At first I thought he was overly shameless but later he was just a crazy friend to little Matt. The story flows wonderfully also l liked the introduction to Terminus. The awakening was also portrayed nicely keep it up.
The novel is a really good one. The plot is nice and the characters are entertaining, if you can ignore the little grammatical errors you'll definitely enjoy it.
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Well done!
Some of the scenes hold solid humour, and the story seems to be developing rather quickly. The relationship between the two main characters and their home life was established quickly, which made their reactions to their circumstances further on realistic to the matter at hand. The writing could use some work. Oftentimes, it swaps from present to past tense, especially in descriptions and dialogue tags. This can be read over though, and the writing is easy to read. I like how quick the story is developing, and the system seems interesting as well. This book looks open to opportunity!
I liked the dynamic pair of the MCs. For a second, I thought one was created only for character development but re-read the synopsis. It is refreshing to see two MCs in an apocalyptic world. Has a The Last Of Us bond vibe. Keep up the good work.
I recommend this book.
You'll always want more of the next chapters.
Surely adding this to my library.
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