I like the premise so far, and it’s obvious that the author has thought a lot about the world and characters and has planned it out really well. My only critique is that there are a lot of sentences without periods and mission capitalization. It’s still a pretty good story though :)
After reading 20 chapters of your story~First chapters are big headache. Your style is something hard for me. I don't talk about grammar or something...Later - story is really better to read. But still something tickles me. But hey! Idea is very good and I wish you the best! This is something fresh for sure. Just without first chapters.
I really enjoy your work! I'd love to stay connected and keep up with your latest creations. Do you have any social media or email? It would be great to be in touch~
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