We can see the rule

Your story was really interesting. Keep up the good work.

The story is amazing and the character names are good.

<p>"Yuan, why did you disobey mom? Do you remember what she said? No cookies before dinner – right?" he prompted though this time he was no longer waiting for a reply. He knew his son would just say his 'dadas' in answer to his questions anyway. It was enough that he'd get his message across –that it wasn't good to disobey his mother.</p>

Now the little girl realise that not all the good thing that comes to you will always be good, it can be angel in diguised.

On impulse, he dropped his fork and sipped on his wine instead of glaring at her. Ana leaned over the table and whispered. "I saw that lady give someone outside something and pointed to this place. She-"

A man who I don't have any relationship with, just a stranger that will fade away in moments time. But in his case, he became more intertwined with my life, causing chaos and different events that made me experience new things.

He saw John in the forest hunting boar and told his situation about him seeing thing.

"Nah! It took me my life to find a place to stay and yet you want me to give it to you? Goodbye." He did and turned around.