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So I think this is my best work in terms of grammar as I've already written two other books and learned from them.
The beginning is a bit enraging so it might not be for some people.
The MC isn't meant to be an all-powerful being, but a spider that pulls strings from behind to get what he wants (Though he still fights a lot).
Also, I already said this in the first chapter, but this story does use historical events but is not completely historically accurate.
These historical events do come later in the novel though, so don't expect them too early.
Uhhhhhh... I think that's it. Anyway, please enjoy my novel!
It's pretty good. The beginning had me on the edge of my seat so I'm looking forward to the future of this novel. Also, hope there is no romance cause I'm not a big fan of it
At chapter 70 and I have very mixed feelings about this novel. First off, it has a lot of potential and so far, it's pretty good tbh. As for why I have mixed feelings; pretty much entirely because of how the MC is portrayed..
It seems the author has fumbled slightly when making a manipulative MC. The MCs intelligence can only be considered above average while everyone else is just stupid. Second issue, the MC is very arrogant. I will say, I 100% am for an arrogant MC...but they MUST be charismatic and strong to back that up (example: Ren from TAPOV). Orien is just cocky and annoying at points. I will say, he is getting development, but he needs A LOT at this point to be a good MC.
I will keep reading because, as I said, it has a lot of potential.
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So I think this is my best work in terms of grammar as I've already written two other books and learned from them.
The beginning is a bit enraging so it might not be for some people.
The MC isn't meant to be an all-powerful being, but a spider that pulls strings from behind to get what he wants (Though he still fights a lot).
Also, I already said this in the first chapter, but this story does use historical events but is not completely historically accurate.
These historical events do come later in the novel though, so don't expect them too early.
Uhhhhhh... I think that's it. Anyway, please enjoy my novel!
It seems the author has fumbled slightly when making a manipulative MC. The MCs intelligence can only be considered above average while everyone else is just stupid. Second issue, the MC is very arrogant. I will say, I 100% am for an arrogant MC...but they MUST be charismatic and strong to back that up (example: Ren from TAPOV). Orien is just cocky and annoying at points. I will say, he is getting development, but he needs A LOT at this point to be a good MC.
I will keep reading because, as I said, it has a lot of potential.
Read if you prefer MCs who pulls the strings over battle maniac MCs.
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