Voidforged Magic

I'm loving it thank you for creating book like thus author

This was an enjoyable read. Having an intelligent MC that actually uses their cheat well is always a pleasant surprise.                              

SOOOO many of the beautiful literary and religious nuances are lost in translation. (More so than normal.) To the point that I want to stab somebody. If you are going to throw around a billion pinyin terms, give the readers something to connect it to, otherwise it is a burden. Right now, as this is translated, it is completely burdensome.If you are going to reference poems, give us the footnotes so we can read the original/poet's other works. (Yes, I am that dork. Sue me.) The religious themes of Daoism vs Buddhism to defy the heavens are very strong and in this story would have been argued clearly through classical texts and philosophical thoughts. If I haven't read many of the original texts that I have seen referenced here, I would have been 100% lost.So... Sorry, but consider this my farewell.

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I almost everything about this story with the only thing I don't like about it is the status page because it's really confusing imo. The MC Is hilarious and I can't wait for her toaster army

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Even though it is just a short novel for now, I think it looks pretty promising. The setting is nothing new, but the mc so far is very likeable. It is also clear to me that some parts of the games plot are being intentionally concieled, so it makes a bigger impact in the future. That or it is really just a very popular game with a sucky plot. Anyway, to be honest, so far this deserves the five stars. We have to see if you can keep the quality going, and maybe make the chapters a little lenghtier.

Am glad fate led me to this wonderful piece of art! it's suspense filled and the character design is just outstanding. Am dying to know more about Kayden and hope this book goes far. Good job Author on this novel! Do add more chapters soon.