I ve come from the author's discord, he asked to put a review with our honest thought and here I am
I started the first chapters on scribblehub and when I ve seen him post on webnovel I created an account just to comment and give my opinion so he can improve the story lol
The beginning is good but there are still mistakes , except this the quality is not that bad and I like the plot .
It s original, we don t see this kind of story often and for now it is a good start .
Maybe the mc is thinking too much sometimes , asking too much questions but I guess in this situation we would all have many questions
good novel so far , hopefully the next updates are as good as the 5 first chapters
This novel reminds me a lot the WH40k universe, there isn't blood and gore yet but the vibes from the first chpters is the same. It's dark and the ambiance is heavy, fortunately the mc thoughts are here to keep us occupied and just by being able to know what the mc is thinking makes us more comfortable.
I put this novel in my list and I'll definetely come back when more chapters are released.
There are a few grammar and spelling mistakes here and there but for a first novel the quality is very good especially since english isn't the author native language.
I really got hyped at the end of chapter 5, I know that this novel just got released but I already can't wait for the next updates lol
The story is good, the mc looks smart and from the tags I can guess that the mc will transmigrate to another world or dimension with magical stuff later in the story ?
Anyway, great novel and I hope the author can keep the updates going because this novel has a great start and so much potential, it deserves to be continued.
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There are a few grammar mistakes but not enough to break the 'immersion', it is overall entertaining and immersive.
Story Development 4/5
There has been one red flag but it is so far good
Character Design 4/5
Updating Stability
3/5 One chapter a few is simply not enough for the readers and for the book to grow
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4/5
Story Development 4/5
I started the first chapters on scribblehub and when I ve seen him post on webnovel I created an account just to comment and give my opinion so he can improve the story lol
The beginning is good but there are still mistakes , except this the quality is not that bad and I like the plot .
It s original, we don t see this kind of story often and for now it is a good start .
Maybe the mc is thinking too much sometimes , asking too much questions but I guess in this situation we would all have many questions
good novel so far , hopefully the next updates are as good as the 5 first chapters
I put this novel in my list and I'll definetely come back when more chapters are released.
I really got hyped at the end of chapter 5, I know that this novel just got released but I already can't wait for the next updates lol
The story is good, the mc looks smart and from the tags I can guess that the mc will transmigrate to another world or dimension with magical stuff later in the story ?
Anyway, great novel and I hope the author can keep the updates going because this novel has a great start and so much potential, it deserves to be continued.