Villainess wants to stay together

    "Huh?" John asked.

Pikachu: pika???

"How are you doing, though?"

Phen stared at the person they recognized as their chief, and their strongest warrior, Yna. The two were debating whether or not they should explore beyond the map given by their forefathers. And it seemed like they were considering the possibility given that the population within their bounds began to increase through the years. The only problem was that they would have to start from scratch until they could go back.

Axl tak berani mendongakan kepalanya ke arah Jerry.

"Please don't call your brother a bozo," Jupiter said, "We'll just teleport there. I'll take us along."

There I lie down on a bed.

It's not a bad fanfiction with an idea similar to the lord, but as for me, I need to open up the world more, work with the characters, make them less flat, give them character. To reveal more about the game he played about the kingdom, it's also worth working on the character of the Main Character. Let's just say it would be interesting to follow the humble protagonist, who has almost no flaws, and power does not spoil him. It will be an interesting story if the main character is not perfect, but with his own problems. for example, arrogance or some other qualities. A person who did not have power before , and then suddenly has power, cannot remain the same person. It is also worth revealing more about magic. Our main character does not use magic, but only skills, that is, he will learn how to use magic, he will become stronger, maybe not much, but it will add a variety of attacks. Revealing the magic would be interesting. I also ask the author to work on the mind of the main character's opponents, I understand our MC hero, but some victories will only bring boredom. Make sure that His Opponents are also smart, otherwise he kills the best adventurers and marshals of the kingdoms somehow quickly. I'm also thinking about other worlds, too, because now he He knows that there are other worlds and it is a sin not to take advantage of this. in general, Istria is not bad, there are pros and cons, there is something to work on, but most importantly, I hope the author listens and makes the story even better, as well as explain the MC's actions, his plans and everything else, we will add more specifics.