After reading first 17 chapters here is my review.
Writing Quality: Writing Quality is good without any spelling mistakes or any grammatical errors. The sentences framed are easy to understand without any colourful words making it pleasing to the eyes. If u like novels with don't use complex sentence with direct conversations with slight comedy u might give this a try.
Story development (CHP 17) is consistent and does not jump from one point to some other random point like some other writers do leaving their readers to guess what happened between.
The story initially may seem somewhat cliche but hey as a responsible reader we must leave sometime for the authors to weave their story right?
Update stability is Ok..might seem low for some MTL Veteran readers but I prefer quantity over quantity
World background: The world background hasn't fully explored yet I advise author to prepare a glossary chapters for it as it might help readers to give them some basic understanding.
overall this story has potential and I hope u(author) keep cooking and get contracted ASAP🙏
let's be honest, this story is made by a great author! I may be a bit biased because I am Nico, I'm very honored to be the inspiration behind this character.
keep working hard toward your dream! I'll keep supporting you all the way!
Just makes you want to read more and more. This is so well written that I wasn't able to stop reading, the plot is really entertaining. The elements of system, and missions, are just so great and the flow, it's amazing. There are twists I didn't see coming and that makes me like the book more. Especially the main character, I liked him from the start.
The world background is intriguing. It's just awesome.
Great job, author!
the first two chapters, I wasn't really following it but the 3rd chapter got me hooked on it and the Fourth didn't disappoint . it is nice now i want to see how he will break the curse and will he get revenge later on or will be become cold and indifferent because of the heartbreak after all the novel is about a villain . nice introduction .
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Writing Quality: Writing Quality is good without any spelling mistakes or any grammatical errors. The sentences framed are easy to understand without any colourful words making it pleasing to the eyes. If u like novels with don't use complex sentence with direct conversations with slight comedy u might give this a try.
Story development (CHP 17) is consistent and does not jump from one point to some other random point like some other writers do leaving their readers to guess what happened between.
The story initially may seem somewhat cliche but hey as a responsible reader we must leave sometime for the authors to weave their story right?
Update stability is Ok..might seem low for some MTL Veteran readers but I prefer quantity over quantity
World background: The world background hasn't fully explored yet I advise author to prepare a glossary chapters for it as it might help readers to give them some basic understanding.
overall this story has potential and I hope u(author) keep cooking and get contracted ASAP🙏
I will return when it has over 150 chapter
keep working hard toward your dream! I'll keep supporting you all the way!
The world background is intriguing. It's just awesome.
Great job, author!