Writing quality is good. The quality is consistent and I'm enjoying it.
But, it could add with some more description.
Story development is good. It's pretty interesting. I like how the system doesn't give him everything (read to find out) and how it's not completely cliche as the Mc was the 4th strongest of the world.
But it could get rid of some of the cliche elements like: Archehon causes trouble, Archehon wins, Archehon goes back to do something else. But seeing how the author is a newbie, I'll look over it.
Character design is okay. Could definitely improve a lot on describing them since it's hard to know how they look like exactly.
Updating stability is something idk. since I started reading this after the break. (I hope the author comes back from the break since I'm enjoying the book).
World background is amazing. I like some of the unique ideas and names the author comes up for the abilities and heroes. This is by far, my favourite element.
Overall, decent book. Before I rate it again, I need to get more chapters. :D
This might be my favorite novel that I've read on this platform. The writing quality is very well done, characters have personality and life to them, the plot and setting is very interesting, and is all around fun to read.
The main character is incredibly well written, and the contrast between his new life and what he was before is so fun to see, along with how that causes him to react to the world around him. The other characters also seem well thought out, and the dynamic between him and his sister is great.
Very few grammatical errors, and overall an amazing book!
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Writing quality is good. The quality is consistent and I'm enjoying it.
But, it could add with some more description.
Story development is good. It's pretty interesting. I like how the system doesn't give him everything (read to find out) and how it's not completely cliche as the Mc was the 4th strongest of the world.
But it could get rid of some of the cliche elements like: Archehon causes trouble, Archehon wins, Archehon goes back to do something else. But seeing how the author is a newbie, I'll look over it.
Character design is okay. Could definitely improve a lot on describing them since it's hard to know how they look like exactly.
Updating stability is something idk. since I started reading this after the break. (I hope the author comes back from the break since I'm enjoying the book).
World background is amazing. I like some of the unique ideas and names the author comes up for the abilities and heroes. This is by far, my favourite element.
Overall, decent book. Before I rate it again, I need to get more chapters. :D
The main character is incredibly well written, and the contrast between his new life and what he was before is so fun to see, along with how that causes him to react to the world around him. The other characters also seem well thought out, and the dynamic between him and his sister is great.
Very few grammatical errors, and overall an amazing book!