After school I head over to his car. Of course this guy is loaded, I didn't realise he came from such a rich family. This must be how he is able to get all the drugs. I sit on the curb waiting for him to come over.
But just then the doorbell rang. Every one were laughing at a line joke that Arav cracked. Arav was their other friend and could be count as the comedian among the friends along with Rehan. Just looking at both their faces was enough for the group to laugh for half a day.
first .. you need tags, Second is getting a code cover... and fourth, start by adding your book to your lib... I'll be back for a better review when you work on this along with your writing skills .. see ya omfie
W story really enjoyed this as a someone's first story it was great. A solid journey of struggles with self-discovery, the character of Dalton felt really human, he has his flaws and it feels like it showed throughout the story. All the homies lowkey hate Vanessa though.
Very Great story, statistically speaking, it breaks its own limitations. it has broken my expectations so many times, the author has a a very simple and engaging writing style, and the plot and world building of the story are very amusing, the pacing is also perfect, not too fast and not too slow. Honestly, I'm looking forward to future chaps, i have really high expectations. Nice work author san🫡
It’s a good story. Regression, 2nd chances, revenge, vr game. Nothing new, but it highly reminds me of Rebirth of the Thief Who Roamed the World and I loved that novel. Ethan is an ok MC, though I do wish the author would make him a tad smarter. A couple of examples are the old man telling him about the coming disaster and that the game is not just a game. The old man tells him things that no one should know esp about his regression and what does Ethan do? Proceed to treat the game like a, well game 😩. Another example is when he was picking the flowers and the old man warned him to leave the area or his real body would die. Of course that means continue picking flowers and explore a place that would literally send him to King Yama 😩🤦🏾u200d♀️Another thing that irks me with this genre in general is the author forgetting gear, skills and their own world rules. Skills come out of nowhere conveniently for “plot,” there’s math involved in skills but I skip those parts bc I have yet to see an author remember or math it right. 🤷🏽u200d♀️What I do like about the novel is the budding romance between Ethan and Lyla. The tag says no sisterhood, but I wouldn’t be surprised if the ice queen chick joins them. I like the guild aspect and the guild battles. Ethan isn’t a complete loner so that’s great. I am looking forward to the game world and the real world coming together. All in all, like most novels, it has it’s flaws but I would recommend it. Good job author. 😁
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