I love the world that's been developing, and all the characters involved. in terms of close plot think of Mulan. my only problem at this point 32 chapters in is the MC has no agency, she has no reason to be doing what she's doing aside from plot demands it. that being said her struggle is real, she has no easy button aside from the fact that she's fast.
"Indeed, it feels so weird thinking that a couple of years have already gone by. It certainly has been a wonderful journey with everyone, first we trained together, then we slept together, and finally we fought together," Phoebe said as the two of them reminisced on the past.
The crack becoming bigger and bigger, until it's forming a large hole. A very large hole. From outside of the hole, its look dark and the darkness make people feel despite, emptiness and no hope. Suddenly from it, sprout out thousands of thousands of the unknown creatures. It's big, dark and scary looking humanoid creatures. Big red eyes, long ears with long furry arm reaching it's own bending knees. Spreading agile onto every conner of lands. Destroying anything blocking the paths and draining every single drop of river and lake.
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