VENGEANCE OF THE RETURNER

Author is very helpful in answering questions/comments troughout the story but this review is about the book not the author.
Warning- some spoilers
Im at chapter 50- sometimes the mc care about people(he kills his own faction guy for raping women) then 2 chapters later he force 20 people to suicide. One second he make a deal with the most cruel god to sacrifice one hundred souls then the next he want to save 4 prisoners.. This MC sooo wishy washy mentality its a joke

Second he is constantly abandoned and hunted by everyone and everywhere he goes, in the first 30 chaps women spit on him, push his head into ground and whip him and then men pee on him...After he survive that he meet a women who told him she was watching everything and made a deal with her to help her lmao without even knowing anything about her nor the world he is in.. he trust to easy..

not to mention im at chapter 50 yet he doesnt even know how to use basic mana/how to fight /how to use his powers/how to use his system.

Also EVERYONE he meets call him newbie because he is stupid and doesnt know anything yet he does 0 eFfort to learn anything.


Sigh my conclusion great story but worst worst wordt most stupid frustrating mc possible

This is something different But I like it I haven't read all of the chapters yet but soon far it a good book.  I look forward to the chapter to come
Wild Bunni[img=recommend]

A very good novel to pick up, Although there are a few grammar mistakes, i'm willing to look past that since english hard.
The novel grabs your attention from chapter 1 and keeps you engaged all the way through but most importantly, this novel is home to the legendary Patrick. A man so legendary that his name will be passed down for centuries to come.
As much as i would love to go on a essay long rant on the mega-chadliness that only makes up a fraction of Patrick's godly appeal. I feel it more important to bring up that this novel is a hidden gem that only gets better as you go on, even if it's partly due to Patrick.

Is there any harem or romance. If there is then this story won’t be for me
I will read and se if there’s any harem
And I hope it’s gore ....??.????.?.??

The book is okay. Pretty middle of the road. There are good points, like the world building however the flow feels wonky and a bit jumpy and the grammar whilst decent compared to some of the novels on here, alongside the flow make it pretty hard to read. But I do believe there is a good amount of potential, the author definitely needs some practice as it can be a little boring and the characters a bit odd. Like he's in India, why exactly is he called Nix? His friend Nagendra should never be that calm in an accident, no matter who you are there is always an initial panic and worry.

To be honest you had me when you introduced Shiva as Shigon

Author I will give you the highest review that I can give, because not only did you write an interesting and amazing novel,  but you also made me wish that, I didn't discover this novel until a year later so that I can binge read all the chapters.

This is not normal lovestory. but very different one what I read regularly but still catch my attention.. It's a gaming story( that's what I call it) where some normal people got stuck inside the game and try to make a way out.

plot is nice. characters are designed carefully. background is also explained in easy way.

This is author's first book and taking in consideration that English is not author's first language small grammatical mistakes can b ignored.
story is little bit on gore side.
I like overall concept and characters.[img=recommend]