Need a lot of room for improvement. But it's still a good novel. It's my own bias opinion, you should read before jumping on conclusion that the novel is not good just by looking at some random review.π
so i read it all like the 10 chapters and it pretty good I can say their are some grammatical errors but they are like 1 in a 140 word I have great expectations from this story it's good keep up bro
this has been really good. other than the title, which currently makes no sense to me, I've enjoyed the story and writing immensely. hopefully when it's fully released, the quality remains the same. oh, on a side note, it gave me an Overlord vibe at first, but quickly went it's own way.
Author here, so let me just give a review from my side. I plan for this to be quite a long series, maybe Around 1000 chapters. Now it may be called, I reincarnated as a system, but the main focus would be on bloodlines and inheritance. That's what the plot would focus on.I reincarnated as a system would view my world from two perspectives, we have two main characters. Each one with a similar similar heroic personality, but very different. I hope you all won't hate Mo Zuo, he is young now, but I promise he will mature into an epic main character! Jason is made to be slightly bipolar so understand if he acts one way here, one way there.
First and foremost! Don't stop at the first chapter or the third, because this is quite good(If you're not quite disturbed by a single thing)The pacing is normal for the start. Good.Humorous MC. Great.(for me at least)Chapter? We have chapters everyday!Grammar. Quite good if you don't sought something only professional writer had.So overall this is great! And i'm expecting for more
I feel like the story could go down any path and I'd enjoy it regardless; it's that well-written.Every character, encounter, and problem is realistic.The author manages the pace flawlessly, keeps exactly the right amount of tension to leave you breathless and eager for another chapter
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