Good story so far. Erika is such a resilient person and a true fighter. The storyline is solid and mostly easy to read. It's also great that you put warnings out for sensitive chapters so that readers can avoid what they don't want to see.
The story is nice and enthralling. I'm hooked! I gotta say I never expected that one hehe. Also liked the pacing and the storyline. A very unique take on the genre! Loved it a lot! [img=recommend]
It was interesting and it was also my first time seeing this kind of webnovel. I mean, I did read first POV webnovels before, but not webnovels stating whose POV is being done like this one.
The chapters are also short. So, the story feels like it's moving fast, even though the pace is actually slow.
I don't really read the mafia trope and don't know much, but I find the plot very unique and interesting. Especially the auctioning element. I really liked how Erika started out as a human trafficking slave. It makes their encounter very believable versus the other kinds of unrealistic meetings with mafias.
Something I find inconsistent with Lacus's character is he doesn't know what he wants? Like he wants to be alone forever and remain cruel and evil, but he also wonders what it's like to have a true love? I find this contradiction repeatedly throughout the story and because of that his character isn't developed.
The grammars make some parts of the story hard to follow, but I really do see potential in this novel to be something awesome!!!!
I love romance....I knew I would definitely enjoy this book for sure. Good job author, I didn't plan to read it but the book cover is just so attractive.
Interesting story with a lot of potential!
The shifting POV is a nice touch.
There are a few grammar errors in each chapter... nothing that affects your understanding and its most likely due to typos imo.
Author, you can try using something like Grammarly to get rid of minor errors like this, its really helpful.
The ML seems to be really stone-hearted at the start, but I can see where his character is coming from.
Best of luck author, I belive that you can take the story to greater heights.
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keep up the good work :)
Can't wait to read more....
The chapters are also short. So, the story feels like it's moving fast, even though the pace is actually slow.
Sadly, the chapters are still short.
I don't really read the mafia trope and don't know much, but I find the plot very unique and interesting. Especially the auctioning element. I really liked how Erika started out as a human trafficking slave. It makes their encounter very believable versus the other kinds of unrealistic meetings with mafias.
Something I find inconsistent with Lacus's character is he doesn't know what he wants? Like he wants to be alone forever and remain cruel and evil, but he also wonders what it's like to have a true love? I find this contradiction repeatedly throughout the story and because of that his character isn't developed.
The grammars make some parts of the story hard to follow, but I really do see potential in this novel to be something awesome!!!!
The shifting POV is a nice touch.
There are a few grammar errors in each chapter... nothing that affects your understanding and its most likely due to typos imo.
Author, you can try using something like Grammarly to get rid of minor errors like this, its really helpful.
The ML seems to be really stone-hearted at the start, but I can see where his character is coming from.
Best of luck author, I belive that you can take the story to greater heights.
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