It was a nice read. The plot is very interesting. I would suggest you to work on your Grammer and sentences though. It can make readers want to leave the story.
This book is quite intense. There's a lot of plot development and the characters are interesting. Can't wait to see where the author goes with this story.
READING STATUS: 5/5
I've read a lot of books on web, but I don't like every one of them. I usually read them for a few days and then put them down.
However, your story was interesting enough to keep me reading all the way to the end.
The book's cover was also captivating, and I'd like to recommend it to other readers because of it.
Just the title of the book got me all excited! I really adore the separate pov's. The characters are so strong and influencing. Keep up the good work!!
Hello everyone,
It's the author here.....hmm, I have a humble request to all who come here to give me a review.
If my book disappointed you anyway then I'm sorry but plz don't stress yourself to give me a review.
Because your 1 and 2-minute reviews can take my whole day of learning......l know my book contains a lot of errors but we all are human and learn throughout our whole life.
life is a beautiful gift of the creator plz don't spread negativity that riin someone's whole day.......stay positive and healthy
( criticism is good and I wholeheartedly accept it. it's you right to do so .....plz don't be too harsh with words)
The story is promising. I like how the grit and brutality was maintained in the mafia setting, which is often softened and romanticized in gang-themed romance novels. The quality of the writing can still be polished, but the technique is already there. The plot also offers something exciting to look forward to. Keep writing!
I was drawn by the start of this book, it was a lovely start. Just the book cover alone was enticing. Keep up the good work Author, the storyline is amazing.
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I've read a lot of books on web, but I don't like every one of them. I usually read them for a few days and then put them down.
However, your story was interesting enough to keep me reading all the way to the end.
The book's cover was also captivating, and I'd like to recommend it to other readers because of it.
It's the author here.....hmm, I have a humble request to all who come here to give me a review.
If my book disappointed you anyway then I'm sorry but plz don't stress yourself to give me a review.
Because your 1 and 2-minute reviews can take my whole day of learning......l know my book contains a lot of errors but we all are human and learn throughout our whole life.
life is a beautiful gift of the creator plz don't spread negativity that riin someone's whole day.......stay positive and healthy
( criticism is good and I wholeheartedly accept it. it's you right to do so .....plz don't be too harsh with words)
thank you....