The writing is understandable. I like it. Very intwresting. I think you the characters are well designed. I was not lost and the story telling is very clear.
I just wanna rate this if there was a problem with the story dont be shy to point it out this will be my very first Sect Novel, Thx for reading my novel
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The author's decision to have it be based on D&D is sas for the novel. Everything is pretty good except the save throws in a world that is supposed to bé close to reality.
I haven't read it yet, but I ain't a snitch so you get 5/5. I just wanted to say, that I think you meant 'beetlejuice' for the title. You got a few spelling mistakes.
Not going to lie I was caught from the start. The way the main character developed from a boy confused from awaking in the middle of nowhere, to a badass soldier all because of the time he spent with the ones he cares about and that a tragedy that fell upon His last loved one may curse his life again is what drives him in this new world.
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