this is the best story i read so far. this is the best story i read so far. this is the best story i read so far. this is the best story i read so far.
Extremely dragged out. Every person in the novel is written dumber than rocks. Idiotic plays based on the MC wanting to be a righteous player.What else should even be said?I spent many hours reading this, yet hardly 1.5h passed in game. Chapters 5 to 60 are just two games (1h). And the second game isn’t even over yet. I expect it to last for at least another 10-20 chapters.The author writes the same thing many different times so you feel deja vu and feel like you’re reading the same thing four times in the same chapter.Let’s not even go into the ReactAndy chat and how that takes up more than half the novel, and another 20% is taken up by [XX donated YY gift] spamming.Below is essentially how I looked at the end of almost every chapter.
Mostly for XP, but while I am here:1.I like the main character2.I like the side characters3.The grammar isn't too bad (some errors, but not nearly as bad as I have seen around this website)4.The story is pretty good so far (I am only about 40 chapters in though).Overall, I would say it is worth a shot if you don't hate system stories (or isekai)
Average isekai cultivation novel, not worth of your time unless you wanna waste it. It doesn't bring any novelty nor has amazing story telling, at best average.
Must read this! It takes alot for me to be so enamoured with a book that I fantasize about it though out the day, so much so I've spent the last bit of my wage on my impatient self so I can read last few chapters. This gets better and better as you continue reading it. *Spoiler it involves rebirth couple that wasn't a couple before rebirth and they pretty much become a family in first 10 chapters. Romance is slow going but I appreciate it as there both still in school. I'm still impressed with how awesome this is. You're missing out not reading this already, honest 😜👌
Sheer terror flowed through my veins as I watched my family burn in a strange violet flame, which seemed to exude a personality of it's own as it wrapped it's tendrils through cloth and skin, mingling and crackling with the screams of my parents. Strangely, everything was...dampered...muffled. It seemed that I could hear what my mother was crying out, without hearing it...until my mind processed everything, letting all sounds in at once "-UN!! RUN JAY!! PLEASE RUN!! WE LOVE YOU!! SAVE YOURSE-." Suddenly, the sickly purple flames consume my mother's voice as it slithers across her face and down her throat. The last thing I see through my tears and blurry eyes were my mother and father's eyes, pleading me to save myself, and that they'll always love me. "MAMA!! PAPAAAA!! I'M SORRYY!!" Screaming and yelling, crying and sobbing...I leave my family behind, to be consumed by the flames of a purplish hell, flames that would consume my fitful nightmates fo the next thirteen years of my life...
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