Just my two cents here but it was a pretty decent story. That lasted until he met a female human, where he proceeded to throw away the last 19 chapters, his backstory, his brain and his b*lls all so he could bend over backwards for this girl as if he's a 12y/o who just got introduced to p*rn.
Lol, this is clearly edited mtl, I saw many indications because I'm an mtl reader. Like on top of my head when the translator mistaken "role" for "character
it was a great story. the author just did amazing job, I am currently recommend this for you who want trying something new. the outline and even the way he tell the story makes me more enjoying this .✨😆🥰
The book feels very fast paced however this also feels kind of correct because it feels like how a person would remember things if it happened to them like they remember the really important things and that's what matters because it's what's interesting And that's good.
There is a confusion in tenses. Characters are detached and it makes it difficult to feel empathy for them. The flow of the story is forced.I would suggest building more on character development and the settings. Info dumps are also a huge issue.
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