Love ... the book! Well written. Thank you for having this book with audio!!!!! I hope you will have other books with audio as well. Thank you ! For a lovely story!
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Underwhelming 'First Impression', the story telling in this novel is comes off as somewhat immature, naive and forced.The side characters are just props that rarely show 'true' human emotions, shallow and without depth. Lackluster flow of dramatization, and many confusing contradiction that's made by the author him/herself. And all of that's just from reading the first few chapters.Well, it's true that people said the key of making a good image, is good "First Impressions". This novel failed to intrigue me, apparently.
He carried her into the living room and set her gently on the large sofa, before turning and walking into the kitchen. He returned moments later with a glass of water in his hand. He handed it down toward her, "Here take this, I don't want you to get dehydrated." He said softly as her swollen eyes stared blankly at the glass he held out toward her.
In past, the Heavy body armor helped & protected him but it wasn't helping his condition now. Driver's Attendant pulled him out his body from the cockpit carefully. Ejected the heavy body armor swiftly. The body had purple impact bruises. Not in one place were the bruises, but they covered the body as a whole.
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