UNMEI: Pantheon’s Game

This is less of a review, more of a first impression as I have read 20+ chapters while writing it. So my opinion might be incomplete. I apologize if something like that happens and would like others to correct me.I would like to start by thanking the author for his hard work and for such an amazing story. It has been quite a long time since I have read a web/light novel with a grounded and realistic MC as well as a well-built world setting.The story started with brief background information on how it all started and necessary information about different levels. It was a nice touch and magnificently done. I liked the temperament of MC. He is intelligent yet has the thought process of 13 years old. He is responsible but doesn't give the feeling of an old man in a young boy's body. His reaction to gaining his sight back, his way to deal with money, or his reaction to his current situation is all realistic, at least as realistic as it can be in a fantasy world. He is not like a typical LN/WN MC who thinks "I am gonna murder this guy's three-generation because he disrespected me by making fun of me" not is he a pushover. He handled his situation like a mature person with a hint of teenage flair (talking about that Middle-finger scene). Overall he is a pretty likable character.The magic system seems pretty simple and easy to follow. I don't have to check again and again which level is after what. The world setting is good so far, not too confusing. The pacing of the story is good so far. It is not going too slow or too fast. But I think there is some space to improve regarding these topics.So far I have talked about the good things of the story. Now let's talk about the things that can be improved.First thing, Proofreading. The story is mostly well written. But there are quite a few mistakes in grammar and sentence making that could have been avoided with a more round of checking. The number and frequency are not that high but still, it hinders the immersion.Next, supporting character development. If first 22 chapter is any indication, I think the author should spend a bit more time developing supporting/minor characters. We have only 1 noticeable supporting character till chapter 23 and it's Greg. He is hinted to be a main supporting cast and good friend of MC. But do we know anything about him other than he is rich and talented? We don't know anything about Greg as a person or feel connected to him. If it is solved in the latter part of the story then it's ok. However, I think it should have been much sooner.The world-building and background description are also much to be desired. For example, it helps the readers to visualize if you give a brief description of the Room MC is living in or the market and its shops when he went out shopping. Maybe a bit more description about people and environment when he went out for the first time after his sight was back. this would have helped us feel connected to the MC more.This part is some selfish request as a reader.Please keep the MC realistic and relatable like this. Don't make him like a thousand other MC whose improvement doesn't follow any logic or common sense. I am still miffed about that 120 points in the practical exam. MC has been blind and malnourished throughout his all life. Moreover, He doesn't exercise or haven't practiced the practical part at all. Suddenly 5 days after getting his sight back, He is using martial arts routine accurately and smoothly. And in these 5 days, he had to gather mana for the exam, learn how to read and write, prepare for the theoretical part of the exam and go out sightseeing. It is almost physically impossible for him to do this properly, no matter how easy the routine was. The craziest part is he got more points than Greg who is practicing longer than MC, has better development, and seems like a genius in martial arts. Please don't do things like this. Don't throw logic out of the window to bring sudden growth to MC or sudden character development. Please introduce a romantic interest but not a harem please. we have more than enough harem plot on this site. what we are lacking is a meaningful, non-harem romance. Please fill that void.

Been reading this novel for almost a year, has been one of my favorites. Needless to say it's an ***** novel but not straight up smut, nor it's a wish fulfilment novel. *Mild Spoilers below* #Mc is a dual cultivator so expect a HUGE harem. One of the biggest harem out there. But only a few girls gets an actual story or development to keep the story enjoyable. #Mc can get very dominant and agresive  some times, so if you are a feminist, it's better if you skip this novel. #Getting girls is big part of the plot but there is also a parallel plot that hits the very root of the question, what is good and what is evil? Have a good read!

sorry, I really can't follow the logic of the story, especially the world background. mc just got op, then there's too much talking of other irrelevant side characters, then boom! mc is exposed to the world that he is strong! btw imo, not a good read to be honest.

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Please add lots of realms it make it interesting and others as well like , more quest but don’t make long unless it’s main quest, more martial techniques more disciple more talent like alchemy, acupuncture, formation, blacksmith, and other earning lots of points buying lots of thing making a grand sect in each realm make mc godlike and make chapters longer

Alright! I'm back after so long. This book is over 200 chapters long now, so it deserves a new review.I'd say it's still a stellar story, just not for everyone. Our Mc is depicted to be an evil person, but just a chapter later he saves someone. Some might drop the book because of that, but if advise you to read on. Also, he sometimes acts or thinks in a weirdly immature or petty way—at least in the beginning chapters. Many would also drop because of this.I'd advise you to keep going, though.Why?Because it's a good story!As you progress further in, you'll realize that the novel is golden. You might have some issues with the MC, Hexarion, but those issues become less glaring at some point. You might even love him eventually. So, yes. This book is still a Five Stars in my book!Thanks for picking up this book, and I hope you have a good read.

I love this novel. The writing quality is not very good at times but I still love it. LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT

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