Short review: Very fun setup with good characters and an interesting system.
Long review: The writing is overall decent, but the author shifts around in tense too much to make it a natural read. The story development is excellent, with a good introduction and setting up the stakes from the very first chapter. The characters are very well developed, with distinct features, and their interaction feels natural. I'm not far enough to say a lot about the world-building, but it appears solid, and I'm interested in how the author is going to make the supernatural features fit into an Earth-like world.
A borrowing system where MC borrows, you know, and rises up from adversities.
It truly is a great premise and the storyline was rather awesome as well. I also stand by on your ideals as well— that the first chapters of the book should build around the character first before anything else.
Keep it up, author. This book shows great promise. I'm adding this to my library. ^-^ Cheers!
Quite awesome. I like how the setting and plot are totally in line with each other. No negative friction whatsoever. I hope I'll be reading more of this lovely story in the future
this is a spectacular book and it gave me a look into what my book was missing. i want to thank the author for giving me the inspiration to pick up my pen and write harder to improve and show that maybe make it to the top
Cool novel! Some people may complain about it being a slow burn, but I really appreciate stories that give you time to get to know the characters before throwing them into the action. I like characters the try to fully understand the weird things that happen to them instead of just accepting it and moving on, and this does that really well!
Awesome. Just great. I really enjoyed reading the chapters I've read so far. The writing style is fantastic. The plotline is great. Dialogue between characters was fun and engaging. Very easy to read and follow. I haven't really read many sci-fi novels, so this is very refreshing for me and has definitely exceeded my expectations. It kept me interested all the while. I seriously enjoyed reading it, and am I'm looking forward to reading more. Great job!
A very interesting story that builds well, has good dialogue, and nice character design. Unlimited Borrowing System is a very creative idea and makes for a great read!
Very detailed character and world development,
Great narration and good plotline.
I really look forward to the upcoming chapters.
good luck to both the author and the book.
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Long review: The writing is overall decent, but the author shifts around in tense too much to make it a natural read. The story development is excellent, with a good introduction and setting up the stakes from the very first chapter. The characters are very well developed, with distinct features, and their interaction feels natural. I'm not far enough to say a lot about the world-building, but it appears solid, and I'm interested in how the author is going to make the supernatural features fit into an Earth-like world.
It truly is a great premise and the storyline was rather awesome as well. I also stand by on your ideals as well— that the first chapters of the book should build around the character first before anything else.
Keep it up, author. This book shows great promise. I'm adding this to my library. ^-^ Cheers!
Great narration and good plotline.
I really look forward to the upcoming chapters.
good luck to both the author and the book.
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