Unfortunate Hero's Retirement Life

Although the novel started out great and was really interesting, after a while it fell short. After about 30-35 chapter in the novel in started to feel bland and boring.

I am sorry that i need to give such a low evaluation.

I tried to read it, but my head srarted hurting while reading the first two chapter.

I read novels for entertainment and to build a world in my mind while reading these stories. if i want to immerse myself into the story, it needs to have a basic level of grammar and story telling quality.

I also read comments about this grammar problem and that it gets better with the chapter as the story develops.

But i needed to stop reading, because my head could not take it.

If possible could you please rewrite the beginning, so that it reflects the real quality of the world you build.

I would really appreciate it and hope your stories get traction and your writing improves by leaps and bounds

After I finished the novel, I can say it was fun.
The world's background is good, and the power system is fairly good.
The biggest problem with the novel is the stupidity of most characters.
Characters with limited intelligence and stupid behavior.
The author should work more in terms of writing characters.
I think that's all I have.

This is a very good novel which remains true to it's name till the very end. It has a slow beginning and remains slow and laid-back till the end, a slice of life novel to be exact. Don't expect too much action, it has a bit of drama, a bit of politics and a lot of fluff.

Writing quality is average with a bit of grammatical errors in the beginning, characters are good and so is the world background.

Yours Sincerely

I write this to ask why. Why does webnovel locked the last 2 chapter behind the paywall? This story is completed so why do the reader have to pay for the privilege to read the last few chapter?

This is simply atrocious.

Good novel, with an interesting premise. The only problem is that the book is very hard to read for a lot of it due to terrible grammar. In one chapter there were only 9 paragraphs without any mistakes. If you can't slog through that, then don't read this book.