I love this auther so much by far my auther. I would reccomend his Blue phoenix's cultivation series on kindle as I can honestly say it is far better than anything else.
REVIEWNarration: Decent and immersiveWorldbuilding: Vast and detailedCharacter development: Nice and steadyCharacter design: OutstandingDialogues: Realistic and LifelikePacing: Not fast nor too slowWriting quality: MagnificentExecution of the Genre: Good pitchStory potential: HighUpdating Stability: SteadyMESSAGENow, this is an amazing work from a native speaker of English! I am very happy to meet one! Such an honour! I am so happy to read it as it was a roller coaster ride of twist and turns of emotions! Amazing work!ADVICENone, the author was a better writer compared to me! Haha.
Interesting concept, I'll admit. The main problems I have with it are the horrendous grammar, annoying/unnatural dialogues, and horrible handling of the third and first-person rules (stop switching!).The best thing about this novel is the update stability. If you can turn off your brain and get down to reading, you'll have plenty of chapters as you follow the protagonist.Still, I don't recommend this.The characters are typical of what you'd expect from a horny **** writing a dual cultivation novel, and there isn't exactly a world built.Don't read this, save your eyes!
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