Megan's part didn't make any sense, she told Mark she switched the babies to make him miserable. He was happy for over 20 years because he had Holly as his mate, he didn't care that her daughter wasn't his, even if he knew from the beginning he still would have loved Daphne as his own. He didn't ...
I realy enjoy when the MC is not limited to the typical generic morals. The MC is not a "good guy" neither are most of his rivals it is like a breath of fresh air when you are constantly trying to find a book with an evil protaganist and you find one but when you find one that is well writen it is awesome. The author updates regularly.
Oh my God. I got the chills so many times toward the end of this book. It completely blew my mind. It managed to surpass my high expectations AND be nothing at all like I expected.
This book, this is truly a rare but good find in this website. The author's writing style is unique, one cannot resist the urge to pity the main character. The first chapter, I was touched by it. I could feel what the main character feels, giving me a hint that the author has skills when it comes to descriptions since they are vivid and unique.Bayanihan, ah, I felt proud to be a Filipino after reading the second chapter. I love how you've included one of our good traits as citizens of our country. The story is somehow relatable for some because it is true, a lot of people are experiencing poverty right now while the rich thrive. I am amazed that the author wrote a novel like this. I am touched by it.Sorry for the late review, it's father's day today so I'm quite busy. Keep up the good work and never ever drop this novel for its potential is great. I wish you the very best, and as one of your readers, I do encourage other readers to read this novel. You won't regret it.
Forgive me for my bluntness in this review. I really do not have a personal grudge against the author; he is actually one of my good friends. And honestly, besides the writing quality portion, the review isn't much of a roast.Writing Quality: Has definitely improved since the author's last novel, but it is nowhere near perfect. The reason is because of inappropriate word choice and sentence structure (he is almost always in the passive) that makes both enjoyable and easy reading near impossible. For example, to describe tears and emotion, the author used (not an exact quote): "He was so sad that tears fell down his face and the white membrane became red." Red and white membrane?? This strange wording distracts the reader from focusing on the emotions. Apart from this, the author's style is more comedic, and the writing seems to be more detached everywhere else. The author also uses different variations of English, sometimes British English and sometimes American. Stability of Updates: automatic 5 because the author has a positive record.Story Development: To some, it might be a bit too fast, and to others, it'll be too slow. To me, it's too fast-paced. By chapter 6, we are already in the first scenario, and the main character got used to the system and this world he is in way too quickly. Even though he now has the memories of his past life in this new world, he should still be at least dazzled.Character Design: I could feel that the characters were all very well thought out, from the way the main character had to experience all of the experiences his soul had in order to feel motivated to take revenge and/or live. World Background: Again, I could feel that everything was well thought out, from the intricacies of the system (a genre that I find to be actually extremely difficult to handle) to the different characters and their stories that were introduced.Work hard, Ansu chan (seven)!
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