Unbroken Melody

This is a below avrage xanxia story, told from an asian perspective, having all the overdone tropes and attitudes indicative of this style of writing. This story has no real depth to any of the characters, even the mc. All interactions are poorly articulated as well as way over done, and throughout the story, there is little to no description of anything. Ninety-eight percent of this story is all tell, and maybe two percent is show, if even that.

Good book so far but where are the system rewards 😭 or how are they being used ?

"Eclipsed By Fate"The story follows Noor, a brilliant businesswoman and martial artist, who hides her sorrowful past behind a calm and composed exterior. Devoted to helping orphans, she struggles with emotional scars, guilt, and enemies from her shadowed life.Sanlang, a rising actor, enters Noor's life when she rescues him from an auction and offers him a choice—freedom or staying as her servant. Their bond grows, but Noor's guarded demeanor and Sanlang's fragmented memories create tension. Their love is tested as enemies threaten their survival and past secrets resurface.A tale of sacrifice, redemption, and forbidden love, Eclipsed By Fate explores trust, loss, and the cost of protecting loved ones. Noor and Sanlang find fleeting hope in their connection, but can their love withstand the challenges of their eclipsed fate?

Hi Everyone,This is my first book (I've written a few others but gave up quickly), I will try my best to remain faithful but I have college so I might not be very consistent. I hope you enjoy and please leave feedback or encouragement or even criticism so I can feel motivated to continue!