i really like this novel. don't let the other reviews discourage you from reading this epic novel. its fire bro you should definitely give this a tryπ₯π₯π₯π₯
I have a feeling this your novel is gonna be successful. But there are something's I pinpointed when reading, the tenses you used are kind of confusing, that's all. I hope you correct them for the future.Well nothing much to say but: Welcome to the World of Authors!π₯π
it's okay, i read it. I paid a little, and all I can really say is that it's naive, from the main characters to the villains. Everyone just believes that the other person isn't lying or the other person isn't going to betray you just because. He has unimaginably good luck, littlerally, everything falls into place for him. He almost never has to try at anything. He just gets what he wants instantly. He gets a key for a random door in an abandoned city full of undead, and an hour later, he stumbles upon that door. the spacing is awful, and time moves slowly, so instead, he just goes from nothing to meeting the god damn king of his country in like 3 days. There's no struggle for him at all. it's absurd that this is so highly regarded. And no, I won't read all the way to chapter 1000 or something. If your book is like this in the first 50 chapters, I'm not going to waste my money getting that far.
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