Twisted Game of Fate

Horrible Grammar started off well and turned into the mc turning g into a total b**ch that cant even take care of it's own benefits. Grammar level is at an all time low. I've seen primary graders write better than this

this story doesn't make any sense, I expected it to be really good according to its name and introduction paragraph. but it's complete rubbish.

Regardless, he liked all the girls in his class because they were pretty. They were so beautiful he almost licked the girl who hit him in the head. She would taste good, but what about down there?

[1763rd year, 1st month, 1st day, Local time 7:00 am]

Therefore, if she doesn't tie me up with a rope, next time I might properly come to eat.

Liz: What's with the ' I guess' part? Anyway I await your answer till next week. Be sure to answer.

I drive home, hazy and happy. I sleep well.

Second!I like the story...The FL is like a puzzle and her identity is unknown. She is a villainess princess and a cancer patient but nothing was described about her job before having cancer. I am eager to know more about the FL since she mentioned how good she was at using guns and snipping! So what is she exactly?I want to know! I also want to know who the ML will be! Ahhh! I feel extremely excited!