TLDR: Read it or I will find you.Ive never written a review before of a more developed book before and at this point ive read thousands of series novel or graphic novel. I can confidently say while this isnt an issth it certainly can be and has the setup to touch that level of excellence. Anyways with that out of the way hopefully youll take this seriously and just take my word for it but if you need more then here we goWriting Quality: The writing quality of this novel is borderline perfect. The pacing is perfect, expression of both visual and non visual, tangible and the non tangible, is perfect. I have absolute no issues understanding at any given point what is happening in the novel and I will always have a clear image and feeling to accompany it. The grammar is also near perfect I know ive seen a typo before on this novel but its been awhile and it only happened once or twice so that should speak for itself.Updating Stability: Since ive started reading this book which was around 140 chapters ish. The release schedule has always been 2 chapters a day and to be honest I have no clue how the author does it but I wont focus on that lol. Even when the author had to take a break because they broke both their wrists and still managed to type a couple chapters during the break is just pure insanity and I cant respect them enough for it. The care and perseverance the author has is clear and leaves room for no doubt.Story Development: As ive said already the pacing is perfect but aside from that the development of the story is just amazing to see. Everything unfolds as if im actually there nothing ever being too much or too little. The ideas and plot that are created and shown throughout the novel so far has been incredible and over almost 400 chapters now has never left me bored and ive always been looking forward to whats next. Always keep in mind though that the nothing is at it seems and no character or place has security here.Character Development: I can confidently say this is the authors strongest ability in writing. The ability to artistically and flawlessly depict the ups and downs to the extremes on both ends of a characters mentality and being able to change over and over again without feeling like a different character or having stagnant development character wise but never feeling truly the same. Every character written here feels like you could plop them into real life and id never mnow the difference if I only judged them from the personality stance and not that most if not all of them could kill me in at least a dozen ways outside of realistic means. As a last note all the characters that are special anyways have a uniqueness to them that seperates them clearly but also links them in way, almost like he created his own culture within the book but never explaines the majority of it and simply had them act according to how they would act in given culture.World Background: At 300 something chapters we still dont know hardly anything about the full world we only have One extreme over another. What I can say is that the setting in all stages of the book so far have been established perfectly and what details we do know about the world has never been shown through a horrific wall of text that induces hatred of all things like a lot of web novels do. Anyways to wrap things up this is an incredible novel and if it wasnt for the 300 something chapters I would say its at the quality of anything beyond your normal web novel and truly feels like a novel written by a proffesional, experienced, skilled, and highly creative author. P,S, Once again this is my first review ever and I dont know a whole about literaure an writing from an acedemic stand point so you can take what I say for a grain of salt ignoring my experience in reading these kinds of things. And if the author ever see’s this I highly reccomend you read the Young Elites series it has a similar feel and is also very very high in quality. Also please bring more of the crazy exploding fire guy I miss him already (dont worry what I said was not a spoiler) Thanks for reading :)
I actually would recommend this novel. I have only read a couple chapters but it has potential.I have to rate it one start on principle though, because YOU FORGOT THE FIRST TWO CHAPTERS OF THE NOVEL?!I dunno how you mess that up, but since they're missing, we don't have any idea how the story starts!I looked at the raws, and read some poor MTL of the first two chapters! I know they're missing!There's not even any reason to have them missing, they're normal chapters!I'd appreciate it if you would just fix this.
I'm hooked. Very good story. The only thing I am waiting for is world-building. It is still early in the story though. I like the unique cultivation and the MC's powers.
This novel told an interesting story and unlike some story in the genre. One of the problems were the writing quality. It's pretty bad, with some sentences repeatedly use multiple 'will' or other useless word.
It's a good novel with a good scenario, so much space for growth! Don't have a perfect gramatic, but... who am i to have been disapointed by this heheh.Hope this job continues better!
[Review after reading 11 chapters]This actually isn't too bad in its own genre.The premise itself is a bit generic, but the way it's got to it is something I thought was unique.The grammar is weird sometimes, sentence structure could be better and the strangest thing I noticed was that the storytelling voice, the narration, sometimes dips into the extreme casual.And it sometimes treats the reader as if he were stupid and also, the story is full of exposition, just telling us 'This is how it is' instead of trying to use another method of convey this information.Story-wise I have only a few complaints, which have may have been resolved in the next twenty other chapters I haven't read.!SPOILERS!This is, to me, the weirdest thing.This is the third and last attempt that Rishi, the MC, has to pass the exam to get a Book of Contracts. He's hurt and instead of trying to get healthy before attempting the exam, he just rushes in. Why?Rishi himself was surprised when he found out that he was healed when he was teleported into the exam arena.So, I assumed that he didn't know, or wasn't sure that he would be.Why is he rushing so hard to get it done, even while hurt?And secondly, there doesn't seem to be a downside to the two types of contracts one can have with a beast when choosing the servant variety.You could be normal friends with your beast, just as with the partner one, but still have the servant one chosen, so that it cannot leave or disobey you.
I read this novel and it's slow! And that's not a complain but a very big compliment indeed! I was able to go through every emotion the MC was going through. And the parts where the MC mentions about his love for his lover, they are pure poetry! And element of Sci-fi is just the cheery on top! As the story plays out in year 2050, the history of world counting the ones that author made were something I really liked to read. So far I haven't really found any prominent mistakes. Honestly, I am completely invested in the book and would love to recommend to read it!
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