The plot is written quite smoothly. Well done. I would say that the expression and use of language for this type of genre is subpar. There needs to be more 'umph' and excitement when writing and describing gory scenes. On a final note, some of the grammar was rather askew - I would advise fixing this so your next readers can enjoy your work!
Chapters are 500 words or less.. The English isn't all that great, the formating and editing is also lackluster. Maybe Author should focus on spending more time on each chapters and making them longer and better.
This novel features a story where being is reborn as another life-form, the concept was well understood. The fusion and separateness of of the body and soul was certainly well explained. Highly recommended.
I created this account in order to say that this novel should really get what it deserves. Which is a slightly better translation and a lot faster release rate. If you can't fix the release rate please give it someone that has the capability to so or of course just get someone to help you. With regards :)
Give credit where credit is due. I came with low expectations and was blown away by this work. Now my expectations have been raised so high that I'm not sure the author can keep meeting them. Then again, if he is who I think he is, that shouldn't be a problem.
This story is quite a blast to read! It’s fun and erotic at the same time! It’s one of those stories that get you going and even has a developing relationship inside of it. I would say that as a novel it is quite good and gives you the overall suspense and feeling you want. It’s a all in all great novel and is carefully written out with little to no mistakes in writing which leads to better enjoyment during reading.One minor quirk I have is the author does take a very long time to post a new chapter. Just be patient is all I can really say I guess.TLDR: It’s a great novel, 100% should read, although updates take a long time.
In the initial three chapters, Jack is depicted as a grandfather who longs for family bonding, but is isolated from them through a series of unfortunate events. The unfortunate events he experienced makes it seem his attachment to his world will fade after the initial shock of being transported. In summary, Jack is a likeable character. Although, the new world background has not been fully introduced yet. However, judging by the quality of the story and the first interaction with the new character from the New World, it will not be disappointing. Something I found interesting is how the main character ends up in awkward situation as soon as he is transported.
"NO! I will save her from him! she is being brainwashed by something! This isn't the Arisia I fell in love with!" he shouted as he flew straight at Kakarot.
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