
Trusted Fairytale
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Author:
Meg_Goodhope
- Status: Ongoing
Rating(3.6 / 5.0, 19 votes)
5 stars
3(16%)
4 stars
6(32%)
3 stars
10(53%)
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Looking forward to more chapters!
So the story starts with are mc who looks plain at first sight (he is a doctor not plain at all) who doesn't seem to know what is happiness? Is he really satisfied with his life? He is always trying to measure his happiness from his moms perspective. But one day when his sister comes back home after a year she discloses a secret. Will this secret change his life for better or worse? Let's know his journey through the beautiful Story.
Writing Quality - I really like author's writing it feels like we are living with the characters in those moments. I could feel the tension between the mc and his sister when he was dropping her.
Story development - The pace might seem slow sometimes but those scenes really are there to give depth to the character.
Character design - All the characters aren't just character in the novel we come across them in real life mc's close friend, the single mother who doesn't like people pitying her, mc himself who feel indebted towards his mother.
World background - It was refreshing to read about different cultures and country's. The author didn't shy away from world building.
Will i recommend this story? Yeah, it really made me think for a moment. I from the start was skeptical about mc's sister as I thought of her as someone frivolous but as the story went further her side of story was told. I failed at judging both daughter and mother, so I recommend not doing the same mistake.
Keep up great work author. ☺️
The writing quality is fairly good with a few structural mistakes here and there. (rather than structural mistakes it's more like the author could've used a better choice of words) still, I shall give him 5 stars.
Also because the story is relatively short (7 chaps) I am willing to believe in the author and give him 5 stars. It's looking promising so far, and because of the small amounts of chap, I can't really give it anything less than 5 as character dev, world-building doesn't just get built in a few chapters.
The only thing that prevents me from giving this a full 5 stars is the stability of updates which is like once a week.
I can only give it 4 stars as of now.
Keep up the good work
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