To find a male lead novel is hard
And to find a male lead novel where the MC isn't a flirt or isn't cocky is harder
But Andrew is someone we all can relate to
He expresses his emotions and doesn't pull up the big boys don't show emotions stunt. Though he's naive he's personality is on point.
Adanna on the other hand acts like she's burdened or had guilt on her shoulders.
My favorite characters are Adanna and Brent and though i haven't met him i feel he will make this book worth reading
Plus he sounds humorus
I must commend the writter for the great plot
There are some Grammer errors with punctuation errors but an editor can fix that.
But i feel chapter 4 was a bit rushed
I will give my honest opinion.
I found the plot of the novel interesting, anyone can relate to this MC and his relationship with his family facilitates this, the MC's personality expressing his emotions helps the reader to better understand his own character.
All in all it's a good novel.
The story was about the do-over of the MC. A captivating plot that made me touched by the storyline itself. This is something that many of us relate to. Wanting to restart again to correct or not do again caused our regrets. Story development at its finest. Five stars!
Great story even though there was grammatically errors it didn't hinder the storyline... if your looking for a novel that has a slice of life, this is the novel for you
Good storyline and character background. The character motivations are very relatable and this story feels real. The author is in the right direction. Good job.
This is a very wonderful realistic novel that I'm sure many can relate to, especially if they have things to relate to. The novel is written in the present tense which I found very strange and confusing since they are supposed to be written in the past tense. Disregarding that, the novel is a hidden gem with lots and lots of potential. Beautiful work [img=recommend]
It has an interesting storyline. The plot was very intriguing. The story pulls the readers to read more of it. The story's progress was well-paced, and the placement was comprehensible. The characterization was also relatively good, but it gets shaky during conversations.
However, the lack of details to descriptions was making it a little confusing at times. There are few grammatical and punctuation errors that need to be revised and edited. Even if the story was successfully conveyed to the readers, I think that it would be best to work on those issues because I believe that this story has great potential and could be better.
No offense meant to the author, and I wish you the best of luck!
INTERESTING!!!!!
It's a plot that can make the readers hook. Firstly, I like the way the writer projected the story. I personally loved the sister, her way of living or her process of thinking is perfect.
Secondly, I like how the character description is done equally to all the characters. Honestly I didn't feel any hassle while reading too. Overall, its a good book with a good amount of suspense element.
Keep Going!!!
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And to find a male lead novel where the MC isn't a flirt or isn't cocky is harder
But Andrew is someone we all can relate to
He expresses his emotions and doesn't pull up the big boys don't show emotions stunt. Though he's naive he's personality is on point.
Adanna on the other hand acts like she's burdened or had guilt on her shoulders.
My favorite characters are Adanna and Brent and though i haven't met him i feel he will make this book worth reading
Plus he sounds humorus
I must commend the writter for the great plot
There are some Grammer errors with punctuation errors but an editor can fix that.
But i feel chapter 4 was a bit rushed
I found the plot of the novel interesting, anyone can relate to this MC and his relationship with his family facilitates this, the MC's personality expressing his emotions helps the reader to better understand his own character.
All in all it's a good novel.
However, the lack of details to descriptions was making it a little confusing at times. There are few grammatical and punctuation errors that need to be revised and edited. Even if the story was successfully conveyed to the readers, I think that it would be best to work on those issues because I believe that this story has great potential and could be better.
No offense meant to the author, and I wish you the best of luck!
It's a plot that can make the readers hook. Firstly, I like the way the writer projected the story. I personally loved the sister, her way of living or her process of thinking is perfect.
Secondly, I like how the character description is done equally to all the characters. Honestly I didn't feel any hassle while reading too. Overall, its a good book with a good amount of suspense element.
Keep Going!!!