Hey! I just started reading your novel and it's amazing. Usually, stories in which the male lead is depressed are very few. Also, character design is good. Keep it up.💜💜
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Please avoid this, it pains my heart: "It was time for Wang Xue I mean Bai Xia...""him/her" decide"*the following 659 words were exempted*" I would rather a more formal novel, but do I get there are few options"A martial soul appeared, but somehow it was different? (People: WELL NO SH*T IT IS)" again formality, both in the sentence and the parentheses"QI" capitals pls (qidian international)"I'm sorry. I forgot about Grammarly-san to edit this and correct some stuff and now she's lonely. Sorry *bows down* Hmmm, do I release TSASS chapter now or later >:D" pls pls author notePlease avoid hypocrisy, it ruins a story (not that you are doing this)good base, develop it wellif you want an editor yeah i can do someThank youquality not badstability idek so 4development hasnt happeneddesign um yeahworld so far good but 5 is perfect so yeah
It's actually somewhat interestingI like the way that the story is progressing and I believe that it is going to be really goodAlso the thing Tha I like is the character design a lot and I hope it will continue being that way
Let's see, I've gone through info on this world then the continent, the strength system, the big bosses, their territory, the treaty... oh here we go. So the big five so as to prevent clashes and battles between themselves decided to make a pact whereby they and their descendants can not leave the center of their regions unless there is a major threat or are invited to another's territory. They also do not have the right to interfere in the happenings of another's territory. Now within the region apart from it being divided into four layers there are also safe.... zones within. There's a rule that within five miles from the safe zone battles....most.. not.. take.. place.
With the four words, another giant sword, blue in colour appeared from the sky. It shot down to the ground like an arrow, slamming to Kim's mana pressure. Enveloping Kim like a lighting dome, trying to pierce through Kim's mana pressure that acted as an invisible barrier.
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