TRAVELLING AROUND THE MULTIVERSE

I'm all caught up now at chapter 315, and could not put down this novel when I was reading it. I really love how Jaya is developing and it's reallly cool when he meets these past superstars and becomes close friends with them like with Kawhi.Please come back soon author! We miss you 💕

Really 8 chapters then the paywall starts? Who are the idiots reviewing stories for the site that think this is ok? No wonder other 3rd party sites are starting to be higher up on the google list when I look up stories, everyone and their mother are pirating these stories to other sites for free. I for one am ok with this; stupid people deserve stupid solutions.

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When I first looked at this novel, based on the image cover, I wasn't willing to read, because it seemed a lot like a cliché thing than not. However, fortunately, I was surprisingly wrong.The narrative is interesting and pleasant to read, and things are developing in a good way. It has a mix of humor and seriousness, which I find very entertaining. Just hoping there won’t be any sort of cliché romance.Just one thing that kinda irks me in the wrong way is the fact that several words are repeated along the narrative to the point of being annoying to read. Here’s an example on chapter 6:**Harls inwardly sighed at hearing this. As the third prince and one of the candidates for inheriting the throne in the future, Felix had received the finest upbringing and education, making him far more intelligent than most children his age. However, his status at the royal palace meant that few would dare to talk back or disrespect him, so Felix had developed an arrogance typical to upper-class nobles. Harls had been assigned to Felix's side and watched Felix grow up ever since Felix was a baby, and viewed Felix almost like he would his own son. He felt that Felix's only drawback of arrogance was due to the environment he grew up in. Harls privately hoped that Felix could mature through this opportunity of going outside the Rodan Kingdom during this mission to gather intelligence on the Hoplia Kingdom for a future invasion.**In a single sentence, the author said ‘Felix’ eight times. It could replace some of the words with prince, young prince, or any other synonymous making it more pleasant to read.Overall, I’ll keep it on my library waiting for new releases, I think this will be a good novel to keep an eye to.

A promising start into the world, but the story quickly devolves into uncessant bragging and acting like a stupid grade-schooler. If you want to read something worth your time, choose something else.

Let's shamelessly rate our selves 5star hahahahaI mean if you can't even love and appreciate what you write then other's will also not.Writing this out of fun while trying for the first time joining a writing contest.I tried to write once and the results was i didn't manage to continue it because of to much idea inside my head.Writing this story with a goal made me realize that it is much more easy to write when their is a goal in it take for example this contest which is kingdom related stuff.I can just focus on kingdom building although I have not much experience in it but it was fun writing especially when you read a first positive comment it made me happy that someone actually enjoy reading it.I am not an author but who knows maybe I have a thing for writing.The Kingdom of Fools online is base in the limited games and novels I read and play so you might encounter familiar setting but as mich as possible I'll try my best to make it unique.The main character Saferu has a dark backgound setting as most MC doesI'm a Harem Fan but I'll try mu best not to go at that direction as much as possible.After all the story is focus on kingdom building so expect more from that side.Hopefully After the contest Saferu kingdom will have its first war battle.New characters in game and in real life will be introduce later.Never realised a day well come where I shameless advertise whatI write hahahaHappy reading!!

After fusing together, his strength return, now that the Fire God clan think he is dead, he will use that to his advantage.

"How can you guys be so careless?! Didn't I told you to be extra careful with this order?! My cousin here doesn't handle the spices well and you guys just have to accidentally put a pepper chili in her salad?! I'm not happy with you guys! I'm gonna lodge a complain! Where's your manager?!"