This story would be one of the best that I have read, such as the apocalypse, if not ... (which I personally did not like) 1. The pace is too slow 2. The fact that Bing Xue is in the author's favorites. How she was able to block the first order zombies, with ease (chapters 20-30, I don't remember exactly). When Bing Xue went to the forest (chapters 91-93) there were a dozen Tier 1 creatures, but she was only attacked by 1 ... how ??? and she handled the snake without a scratch. And the fact that the author overestimates her statistics (so it seemed to me). 3. What is the meaning of evolution ??? the difference between lvl 24 and 26, 4 status points .. All praise towards Mc is pointless. A monster that has not yet been in the universe is nonsense. There is nothing special about Mc that matches Lilith's words. And right in the whole universe, there is no one better or like Mc. It sounds a little silly to me personally! Even with the downsides, the story is good - that's just my pathetic opinion.
It’s a fun story and unique idea hope they finish It’s a fun story and unique idea hope they finish It’s a fun story and unique idea It’s a fun story and unique idea hope they finish It’s a fun story and unique idea It’s a fun story and unique idea hope they finish it
This story was definitely interesting, but I feel like there needs to be some work on the pacing.The chapters are a little too short imo and the overall story progression feels very slow. I feel like before we were going into such a long arc we should have spent more time with the original setting.A lot of the initial flare kinda got lost. I wanna go back to who I assume was the mc and continue his story.Also (and this is very personal...) I'm not that into gambling so a lot of the future chapters kinda lost me.THAT SAID!!! I do feel this is very well written and that the characters are well developed and charming to follow. I just wish the direction went somewhere different, or at the very least went somehwere faster.
Dev's eyes were mischievous, "How could I have handled so much hotness? I couldn't piece two words together to make a sentence, so I thought it better to be quiet, but my eyes never left you for a minute, didn't you notice? I was scared that it was far too obvious."
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