You need to shore up your grammar skills. You have a lot of missing commas, unnecessary addition of -ed, and wordy sentences. But considering you just started, it is okay. Add more sensory details; you say forest, but what about it? Your characters need more depth to them. What drives them? What weird quirks do they have? How do they deal with issues? etc...Keep writing and you will get better, just never give up!
It isn't bad, but the plot is too "slapface" if that makes sense to you. Haru just does things and they work out perfectly. What makes Reverend Insanity Reverend Insanity has been basically stripped away and Haru rules supreme in this weird reality. I didn't expect Gu Zhen Ren levels of writing, but this was kinds bad IMO. If you want to see a traditional cultivation MC slapface Fang Yuan, then you might like this story, but I ain't buying it.
Obligatory Author Review :3 please give my book a try, although it won’t progress quickly since I have an unnatural updating time. Maybe I’d update once a week, maybe once a month. Anyways school is annoying so please forgive me :3
The story was fine but this has they absolutely worst romance and harem I have ever seen how can u about to get raped and all ur most loved items get destroyed and ur sister is in the next room fucking and u fall in love with that guy instead of getting mad they didn’t help u dropped
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