I'm addicted to this book it's the first novel i read whenever there's new chapters! I definitely have to check out his other works! Keep up the solid writing! And more chapters!! 😤😤🙏🙏
Review (Chapter 80)The novel started off great in the beginning, i was absolutely wow’ed by the introductory chapters. But then it starts to fall off, pretty much levels dont matter to the mc, from the first fight to the boss fight. after a little while its explained how his attributes are higher than normal for his level and his 120 rating further increases the effects? But lets talk about the spider, an arrow blows off half the bosses face ‘ok a consumable whatever’ he uses a spear and controls it to spin inside the boss monster’s body getting “super critical hits” Okay he wins bc he used environment but then how about the Mythic boss which he shouldve died just being near the fight and he causes the boss to be weary of what a lvl 15 when the boss and players are so high he cant even see their levels. he uses his ultra big brain from being there a little bit to figure out the lightning patterns that the guilds who studied to fight the boss didnt even notice and uses the environment to electrocute the boss and his sword to cut and kill this super high ranked mythic boss and proceed to demolish and intimidate the high ranking players and then escape? Cant continue reading because game mechanics dont apply here and the stat page is meaningless. I enjoy the background building but inside the game i just cant anymore.
I read this on scribblehub and it's definitely one of my favorite stories currently. The writing flows smoothly, the story development is very interesting and character design is great! I especially love the father-son interactions. I'm just hoping that the updates will be more frequent.
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(not a very proper review, just my thoughts)So far I'm liking the story, the punctuation is sometimes a bit off like there are sometimes runoff sentences and no commas where there should be. And the 'I' is written as 'i' but that's just me being nitpicky.In one of the later chapters, there's a repeating (whywhywhywhywhy, etc) and I feel like there's too much? I had to scroll down for so long ahThe story is good but there's not enough world-building. If there were more then that would be great.Not sure what it meant by using 'half his powers' though?Also when MC dies, he meets this guy asking for help and accepts it? Not sure why he did and is not at least a bit freaked out.There's a chapter with character info on it, but I feel like it spoils the story a little. I would have just put in the characters that were already introduced in the story rather than just say, hey, this is the ML and the MC and the villain, they like this stuff and hate that stuff.Though I hope author-sama updates this :)
i love the flow of the story. The ML always do his best to prove himself in the show. The challenges in raising star was good plot and im very excited to see the group will win .
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