Transmigrated as the Ex-Wife of the Villain Who Dotes on His Daughter

The “son-in-law” novels are super popular in china. I’ll name some of them to emphasize how popular they are... *ahem* The Strongest Son-in-Law(最强女婿). Most Optimal Son-in-Law(最佳女婿). Return of the Mad Son-in-Law(狂婿归来). Invincible Son-in-Law(无敌神婿). The Perfect Son-in-Law(完美女婿). Super Son-in-Law(超级女婿). History’s Most Optimal Son-in-Law(史上最佳女婿). First All-Rounder Son-in-Law(第一全能女婿). God Level Crazy Son-in-Law(神级狂婿). Wealthiest Son-in-Law(巨富女婿). This isn’t even 0.00001% of all the “Son-in-law” novels they have.Besides, they’re all mostly the same; mc marries some super beautiful young lady from an influential family, others look down on the mc and bullies him. The mc finds out that he’s some long lost child of another influential family/The mc reveals that he was actually the CEO of a big company(it’s usually either one of these and it only gets revealed when his wife is facing some troubles, usually her company shutting down).

Seemed interesting. I thought, Hey a story about a sytem that slowly turns tbe mc into a fill blown vampire, neat right? While the idea is certainly cool, and the world backgrojnd at least plausible in the sense that its slightly different from the usual people from regular earth now have powers trope, its...dull.The characters are currently extremely shallow, there is the most strange contrivances and forced behavior.  Now trust me I want to enjoy the story but the amount of hand waving required is rather high. Im at the point where its required that I simlly forget about any semblance of logic or reasoning. Heck even just basic plot flow requires me to have immense suspension of disbelief.  Tbe idea has great merit. The method the author uses to slowly change the mc into a monsterous creature is neat. The actjal implementation within tbe story and how the mc and surrounding characters react is not neat. Its dull.Keep trying author, I am sure you will make it better and better as you go. Just dont force stuff. You want something to happen, ok, them think about the most logical and realistic way it could happen in the world setting. Dont just force things to occur a la deus ex machina, hand wave miracle juice. Good luck!

Honestly I couldn't make it through 10 chapters, grammatical and syntax errors make it literally painful to read. Plot seems interesting enough to be feasible, but the cringe factor over powers all.

I deleted my past review, this would have been one of my favourites if not for the really horrible grammar that really makes my eyes hurt. if you can improve on the grammar it would be awesome

This novel is on the leve of lotm , reve insani and the legendary          tyrend

Quite boring, the MC encounters deadly situations almost all the time, it's too much to the point of becoming very boring, the only slightly eye catching thing is the novelty of the mc's ability and the fact that he can become a monster, other than that, the main plot, the characters, the world background, and so on are just mediocre. I'm also disatisfied with mc's personality, sometimes he's quite slow to adapt, he was amazed at simple and predictable things. I also have a feeling that things will be quite repititive. Personally, it's not really worth reading. But maybe it's personal taste and other people like it.

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