writing again terrible writing skill, trash grammar, mess of pacing, bit of Yuri between female lead and her mother, (yes anything seksual between females it's Yuri)
Not worth the read, wasted time to read 200 chapter. His cultivation is extremely slow, he's also arrogant and always know to make trouble to other people and as for his "so called" system sigh.. Only creating enemy without resolving the source.The end is just rushed apparently, anyway not worth it.
The world development in this novel is really top notch and compared to that I think the character development is a bit slow pace but hopefully it will soon get great details too. Just one thing, I would like to suggest you to not start every sentence in a new para with a 'The' I saw a lot like that and although I personally love large paras many people don't so try to include some single short sentences between the paras sometimes and use the spacing a bit better. Besides the story is going great and also I would love to see more of those character arts of yours so keep posting them too👌
Lmao! What is that cover 😂😂😂!!! It looks like something you would find at the back of a child's math book! Come on Mr Author, poor performance right there...
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