Transform into a magical girl after getting off work

  • Genre: Other
  • Author: Arc salt
  • Status: Ongoing

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  1. dotQ
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    itachi uchiha is the best so is Shisui.😼 we all know that itachi still stronger than sasuke cause itachi beat up sasuke almost blind, if u haven't notice this was shown in itachi point of view in the show. vote itachi
  1. DarwinLewis2556
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    What the hell waiting for this book to be released but not hope it will released next week. It already has more than 140 likes and yet it is not released scheduled.
  1. arkofdark
    arkofdark rated it
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    Translation Quality:⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️Stability of Updates: Still in trials so no commentStory Development:⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️Character Design:⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️World Background:⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
  1. King4ever
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    A truly amazing novel with a great main character that I personally like much. Moreover, the story is perfect with a great pace. Until now, I haven't found anything I would like to add to make it even better.
  1. Lawlietttaaa
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    All Chinese novel clichés got fulfilled in the very first chapter (well, aside from the arrogant young master thing). The characters are beyond dumb (Not only the MC). An example would be that your brother may die because of his heart disease, which needs medical attention. That character however decided to say she wants to stay by the MC's side for some frickin reason. Shouldn't count as spoiler since it's in the first 2 chaps. Should only be a right cup of tea for young teens that love such things and aren't tired of it already. Hope this helped you.
  1. Fallency
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    When I read the synopsis, I suddenly remembered a side character from an anime who had the ability to copy other abilities, and seeing as how the MC also has something similar going on, I couldn't help but be interested to read more. I rarely read novels in this genre but I like this one. The storytelling keeps you interested and the plot looks solid.I'll definitely recommend reading this!
  1. GodofOMINI
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    It is a very nice story, it might be a bit slow paced for some people, but I do recommend giving it a read. I would rather not spoil anything being that it isn't that long as of now.
  1. Ussop
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    In the beginning it was church now it jump to exploring the universe which then leads to a crowd of side characters gathered together, the MC isn't really introduced all that much, the only thing we know is his nameA  beauty  introduced into first chapter but its not a "jade" beauty along with a lot of inspiration from other worksit can engage a reader who isn't all that curious and want to waste time. Even the outlines of bolding words, exclamation points (!) actually feel like we're inside the author creation.Although the mona building isn't really describe how big it is until a few chapters later.I would say as someone who spent the first few chapters reading it can really engage you to a world of likable fantasy.Some scenes like magician ones could using clapping to draw attention of the background character in front of them or those around them when they're yelling/scolding others for mistakesHowever in chapter two there is 2 random bolded texts that were suppose to be inaudible, what is this about?In chapter 3, romance is in the works. This kind of engages more plotline depends on how you view/build itI like how you introduced assassins who hide with cloaks on.I get your trying to switch povs a lot, I think labeling that pov from side pov to MC pov may be a good idea to not confuse readersOther than the first few chapters in, you are doing well so for on your novel.
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