Transcendent Gene

"yes, you righ its been two hundred yeas ago, she sould be adult now"Mira seem confused

"Hmm… so could that have been Souma Poli?"

"I can't eat noodles for a straight whole month, and I'm not letting you eat too much unhealthy food. Eat your rice or I'll make you." Ping sighs and gave the girl a look.

there were a lot of gods there and so he tournament began I stayed in the shadows until GOD and Buddha were the last on

I love the story! Especially the concept so far for this novel. It’s not very covered yet so it doesn’t feel bland to read. I also really appreciate the fact that your scenes with characters haven’t fallen flat! It feels like I’m simply looking at a textbook with some others novels. Thank you!

i'm not yet done with the 1st chapter and I already stopped reading.I don't want to be this kind of person but please fix the grammar. there are alot of it as well as misspelled words which is irritating and makes me loose interest.

While reading the first chapter, I perceived the MC as a mischievous spoilt brat, but as I read on, I realized he’s actually sensible and mature for his age which is understandable due to his background.The story progresses quickly, and I was caught off guard by the sudden shift from the third-person narrative to first-person narrative in chapter 4, but I guess that works as well. Overall, the story is very good, and would have readers like me invested in it. Good job, author 😊